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Confusion
by Allen Teo
A Careless Spy cheated and distracted by Mery
Comments
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Rachel Col
Woah what a cool idea! The animation seems a bit too suddenly exaggerated in some areas though.
Jordan Lewers
The acting was a bit much for the orange-haired girl, against the audio
Marcus Taylor
Some really expressive movements, but I would look to improve your lip sync to really sell it as a whole.
Richard Carrillo Barrios
Awesome!
Ching Jo-shua
animation is smooth, what i would suggest would be control the overshoot of the turning for 1st character , try not to cover the character mouth because it hard to see lips sync and the last one would be try to hit the pose on "Spy" yours was a bit off
Blue and Grey
Lacks body motion.
Byron Pockrandt
Very good poses and action breakdowns. Very good. Also great storytelling poses and camera animation. I would advise more work on the lip sync however. You are missing a lot of potential for expressions to enhance the storytelling even further. Also the prisoner looking over to the keys should be a little slower to give it more of that evil intent feeling.
John Sloan
Great idea!