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want to be 007.

by Manish

Final Rating: 4.96. Finished #34 out of 96 entries.

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Animator

Manish

Experience

I am student.

Time Taken

3weeks

Description

I thought I was going to be this amazing spy!

Comments

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Marcus Taylor

I'd maybe try breaking up your poses a little bit. A lot of the movement is in the hands at the moment, which isn't always bad, it just makes the twinning more obvious.

Sujit K

Very good animation some where little bit stiffness is there, best of luck.

Harsh Bisht

Nice effort....Need to refine more...

Sabrina Winkel

The short haired girl has some weird hand movements.

Çağtay Kubilay Güraras

It's stops and moves so much like a dance move. Good job but try to bit more fluent with the motion.

Gaurav Rawat

Nice one

Abhishek Kumar

very good job

Byron Pockrandt

Good overall. Some of the motions could be timed better, particularly when she says "spy" I think some poses came a little early, particularly when she says "Everything" and "before". The second girl is very stiff. Get her arms to move around a bit more.

Michael Kristiansen

A little too much pose-to-pose. More in-betweens to smooth it out and it will be awesome!