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Company Birthday
An employee feels unfulfilled at her company birthday party.
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Sabrina Winkel
Nice!!!!!!!!!
Jordan Lewers
I'd recommend bringing the camera closer to their faces. The placement of the chairs and cake are a bit distracting because I keep expecting someone else to enter the frame
William Harrison
I love the character design but I feel like some of the animation could be improved it seems kind of choppy.
Roger
Great drawings, but the animation seems quite stiff. The perspective on the table is a little weird.
Hanne Dewachter
Haha, I love it! Great character design, good animation, fun interpretation. Just a little stiff here and there, but I like it a lot!
Byron Pockrandt
If you finish the gazelle on the missing frames this would be great. Thank you for using solid shapes for your poses. I think there could be more movement as well with the elephant within each pose.
Brett Q Stumpf
needs completion but it's good