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Wolf Spies
not much, I am currently an animation student at college
2 weeks
My first entry
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Richard Carrillo Barrios
no sound.
Ruth Agada
no sound
Sabrina Winkel
What happened to the sound?
Chris Clarke
There's no audio, sadly
Shakya Achyut
whoops no audio
Suphanat (Oat)
The animation is good but the sound is missing.
Jordan Lewers
That's unfortunate that the audio didn't appear, but even then, I'm having trouble even seeing the characters. They're so darkened that they blend into the background, so a lot of information is lost.
Byron Pockrandt
Besides not having the audio, this is an ok start. You're going to need more breakdowns between the poses though to make the animation smoother. Also, since this is a 2D animation, I would suggest using solid shapes when starting to block each pose, that way the characters don't seem so morphable.
Brett Q Stumpf
try pottery. animation is not for you.