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Unsatisfied job
by Dhruba Sinha
After long time Mery and Ray meet together, mery upset and frustrated about her job .. Ray is a positive character and he like Mery.
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Jordan Lewers
Good acting, but I think Ray's palm should be opened down on the table instead of a closed fist. That seems to fit the character more
Shakya Achyut
Impressive work!! the only thing i feel different is that mary seems like out of energy in animation, while audio isnt. But this is Good animation.
Sabrina Winkel
I love the boys enthusiasm and the girls facial expressions! Well done!
Edward.J.Gonzalez
The lip sync on the left character its a bit off
Blue and Grey
Nice. But why using Ray for female voice? Over all animation should be few frames earlier. The action is not hitting the dialogue. Mery needs to be more energetic and stronger. Nice facials though.
Byron Pockrandt
Wow! Awesome job! Everything flowed very smoothly. Everything felt very natural. You nailed those facial expressions. I also love the camera angles.