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Chat with HR
by Morris Raab
Two variants of Aia from AM with the extras used.
Playblast, viewport 2.0, anti-aliasing. Time is based on loose logs of my time spent alongside my to-do list.
Comments
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Rachel Col
The acting feels realistic, but maybe could be a bit more exaggerated?
Sujit K
not good
Sabrina Winkel
I liked the acting
William Harrison
There are some very simple things that you can fix such as the girl actually putting her arm on the desk instead of it resting on air, unless she has an invisible spy gadget there. Besides that keep on working on those fundamentals.
Byron Pockrandt
The lady to the left should move a bit more to make her feel more natural and alive. I do like the hair animation with the ponytail. Although it does clip through the chair at 170. The girl on the right's movement does need to be a little more quick and punchy. Points for trying to add animation to the end of the clip, but I don't think it's necessary here.