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Rooftop Confession
My first submission!
A former teacher confides in her CIA partner.
Comments
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Sagar Katara
looks like you ran out of time.
Richard Carrillo Barrios
I would have prefered to watch it complete in Black and white than incomplete with color.
GJ anyways.
Sabrina Winkel
Ok first of all she was still as a statue and kind of wavy. Then she completely turned into a pen outline
William Harrison
I think one thing that could be improved is the head turn during the part when the yellow spy says, "person I was before" the neck kind of stretches out and the head goes out too far. Besides that I like some of the stuff you have so far. Hope you finish it sometime soon.
Byron Pockrandt
Yellow character was done well. Finish the red character and this will be a great piece.
John Sloan
One of the better 2d animations ive seen for this competition. I would worry less about coloring, and worry more about getting your line art done.