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You're Exciting, Charlene Brown
In which a former teacher is encouraged that she makes a good spy
Comments
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Luke Coleman
I don't know if there is missing detail here due to the resolution quality, but from what I can see there is a lot of improvements that can be made for this.
- Appears to be still in the blocking out stage, make sure to spend a little time refining the curves.
- Lack of eye movement (blinking & moving)
- Character 1 fingers are glued together for the whole animation.
-Character 1 has good facial expressions at start, after she turns it then becomes a static pose however.
- Character 2 has good animation, however her mouth movements are a little too exaggerated for certain words.
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Shakya Achyut
Personally i think this rig is only good for gesture animation. missing lotta basic principles of animation. Very stiff characters, and animation is very linear. No anticipation no arc..Dont give up, u can do it
Sabrina Winkel
Huge arms huge hands. Lip sync is bad
Byron Pockrandt
The first character needs to move even after she is done speaking. She needs to move more naturally as well. She feels more like a robot right now. The lip sync also needs some work.
John Sloan
Pancake hands are incredibly distracting.