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Boring Spy
I would really appreciate it if you guys could give me any suggestions and corrections. (doesn't matter how small they are). I want to improve my animation skills to match the industry standards.
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Bridget McCleary
the lip sync needs a tad more work
Samuel Hopkins
I enjoyed this! The only thing that I think needs improvement is to removing the twinning of the fist at the end
Sabrina Winkel
Twins! The 2nd girls shirt is a little fuzzy
Ruth Agada
The animation is getting along. I think the second character should sit up when the first character is about to finish her compliant. That would give her good anticipation to say what she has to say. Also the lipsync need a lot of work. Great job so far.
Byron Pockrandt
Overall good animation. The body moves naturally and smoothly. The mouth shapes could use a little more variety though. Widen the mouth at the E sounds.