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It's been a long day
by Prawta Annez
I heard the clip for this month two days ago and just couldn't resist not trying as I love the movie. Managed to get some really rough key frames but the smaller one I spent a little more time on.
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Deepak Kochhar
Very welldone
Hanne Dewachter
It seems like you have good animation basics going on there, but it's very unfinished.. I like the first background you drew a lot though.
Byron Pockrandt
The first character was done really well. Given another month, this can be a great piece of work. I'd like to see more on the second character. Fix the audio and the last couple frames and it's a decent piece.
John Sloan
Framing could use some work, the animation seems far away.Girls animation still needs work. Not enough squash and stretch on the heavy movements. The hair that falls doesnt move realistically. Good job overall though.