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Secret Admirer

by Samuel Hopkins

Final Rating: 4.40. Finished #45 out of 96 entries.

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Animator

Samuel Hopkins

Experience

4 years

Time Taken

15 days

Description

That feeling when your favorite coworker walks in.

Comments

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Sabrina Winkel

Um, the lips are like in FULL SPEED. Slow down, work on lip sync

Morris Raab

Too many movements for the amount of frames on the first shot. Really like the burst of enery in the second shot though.

Shakya Achyut

holy sheeet those meouth! LOL awesome

Deepak Kochhar

Superb Work!! Well Done

Elizabeth

the body movement and poses are great I would keep working on the lip syncing overall great job!

Jordan Lewers

There's a bit too much overacting going on here, but nice poses

kamal

lip-syncing is too fast

Byron Pockrandt

The camera angle on at the beginning is an interesting choice, but I'm not sure if it quite fits the scene. The overall body poses and and facial expressions are great. Great job on that. But the lip sync is needing more work. The first character seems to be a nutcracker the way her jaw is opening so wide every time her mouth opens. Don't have it open so big, keep it subtle and natural. As it is right now it is very jittery.