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That feeling when your favorite coworker walks in.
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Sabrina Winkel
Um, the lips are like in FULL SPEED. Slow down, work on lip sync
Morris Raab
Too many movements for the amount of frames on the first shot. Really like the burst of enery in the second shot though.
Shakya Achyut
holy sheeet those meouth! LOL awesome
Deepak Kochhar
Superb Work!! Well Done
Elizabeth
the body movement and poses are great I would keep working on the lip syncing overall great job!
Jordan Lewers
There's a bit too much overacting going on here, but nice poses
kamal
lip-syncing is too fast
Byron Pockrandt
The camera angle on at the beginning is an interesting choice, but I'm not sure if it quite fits the scene. The overall body poses and and facial expressions are great. Great job on that. But the lip sync is needing more work. The first character seems to be a nutcracker the way her jaw is opening so wide every time her mouth opens. Don't have it open so big, keep it subtle and natural. As it is right now it is very jittery.





