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September 2016 Frederic Verges
by Frederic
A frustrated girl that explains his life to friend.
Comments
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Sujit K
back ground is very good but animation is too floaty.
Sabrina Winkel
Very well done
Richard Carrillo Barrios
GJ
Check your hand movements, try not to make random movements if they don't help the expression.
Jordan Lewers
Her palms do the same motion a bit too much, but otherwise, good animation!
Hanne Dewachter
Has some lovely aspects, but the lipsync is kind of a weak point. It looks like they're not really articulating any of their words.
Byron Pockrandt
Great body animation. Very smooth, very realistic, very natural. However, you can't forget the lip sync. The mouth needs to match up with the words to complete the believability. Great scene set up as well as the water animation.
Michael Kristiansen
A little too much animation on the hands in the beginning to my taste, but other than that it looks good.