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the boys and the fall
Description
boy sitting in a room drinking milk from a glass while his classmate sits on books and collapses
Comments
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Samuel Bourland
Dialogue looks like it could be good. Body mechanics/staging needs work. Also better render. It's hard to even see the work that was done.
Lucas Donaldson
Resolution makes it very hard to see what's happening. From what I can tell, your facial expressions are pretty good, but it's over all very distracting to have to squint to see whats going on.
Eric Solomon
need better quality