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Final Rating: 3.41. Finished #111 out of 128 entries.

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Experience

9 months

Time Taken

1 month

Description

Short story full of questions

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Oliver Gallagher

This one has a good start and the lip sync is quite good. However it could use more facial expressions and the camera seems to jump all over the place. To make the shot more interesting add some background elements and lighting, the animation itself could use some squash & stretch and some more anticipation.