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2 fast food employee seek the truth why they are there
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Richard Adams
The subtle breathing movement of the woman is well done, though I kept expecting her to wake up or do something to explain her presence there. Having two faces in profile isn't ideal. Characters don't really move much, do they? Needs more emotionalism and action, so it's visually entertaining. Get up, move around, emote. Very well drawn through, nice clean lines.
Alice Cwik
Lovely setup and nice gesturing.
If you make the movements stronger it'll look even more expressive and interesting.