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"Clown Job"
by Renia Kirana
Description
A sober conversation of a working tired clown and a punk at an ally way vending machine.
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Richard Adams
Very well drawn, terrific character design, funny idea, but poorly animated. Entire character needs to move, not just little bits of it.
Kyra Simone
Nice framing expression and situation. Key the entire pose at one time and move the whole body together. That will bring it out. Lastly, more inbetweens.





