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Weird Worker
by Arpan Mahor
This is the animation of a conversation between a normal worker and his co-worker who tries to be funny.
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Jennie
I get mad scientist vibes, I could totally see there being a small explosion at the end from his cubical.
Lola Robey-Levine
Your timing's pretty good but I don't think your framing and layout choices help at all. Around frame 210 the character that is speaking starts getting blocked by the character that isn't speaking
Christopher Scott
Your one character is blocking the other
Kelly Haryanto
nice one!
Oliver Gallagher
Animation is quite good but the character with the glasses is not really the focus of the shot and the back of the other character's head seems to be the focal point which is a strange and distracts from the shot. move the character with glasses to the left a bit.
Zeff Hyde
A perfect example of layout and acting over polish and frills- bravo!
Alice Cwik
Can't see much of the animation.