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Captain for Hire
Mitch, the captain of a small vessel has been hired by an unknown customer to transport some dangerous cargo. Who hired him? He doesn't seem to know, nor does his wife Linda or his first mate Gus.
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MichaelSafwat
It's smooth moving but the area of his chest and below it is not moving as i thing... As if it's rigid...
But it's smooth motion..
Jennie
Best thing is the lighting, I believe it.
Richard Adams
I like your idea, and setting. Character moves smoothly. Main weakness, too much random hand gesturing. Perhaps making a video of yourself or a friend acting it out, using that as reference, will help?
Oliver Gallagher
Whilst I put a lot of work into it, I think it needs a few improvements made. In hindsight I can defiantly see where these changes should be made but I still think its at least decent.