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A dusk at the bar
Description
A cowboy tells story to a bartender.
Comments
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Mitchell Kirkpatrick
I appreciate the hand gestures being different than most of ours. Especially the end “I like that”. It changes the mood a little bit and fits the setting you chose. Also, the facial acting and overall control is very good.
Joel Murphy
I really like the pauses in your animation! Really nice work!
I think the facial animation could use some attention.
Cristian
I like the acting choices, especially with the cowboy outfit. The only thing I would suggest is to try to change the hand gesture from "painted on the wall" to "be curious", i feel the transition is a bit unnatural with his hand





