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September beginner practise
by Rene Beran
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Adele
The expressions and gestures look really nice, I think it would've looked ten times better if you had added more frames to make it smoother, and finished up the character. It's still a very nice entry!
andrew sharp
This could be really good like your posing needs ease in and out. practice the bouncing ball, every thing is the bouncing ball to his head to his hands
Richard Adams
Feels like an animatic, not a finished animation.
Mitchell Kirkpatrick
This is a great layout. Great start. You’ve got solid gestures that just need to be inbetweened. But you probably knew that already.
ro crown
Great posing and this and other characters that you post for the future entries have that special ' it ' factor that i and others on here are looking for ....and i hope to see alot more entries from you if ya wanna and thanks for posting this fun one!
Big 4 stars from me and keep up the good workmanship please...thhhaaaannkss!