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David's Ted Talk
by Aditya Oka
Description
David goes over an introspective experience he had in his Ted Talk presentation!
Comments
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Dan Hollister
In my opinion the camera moved a bit too much and not smooth enough. I liked the end with the realization that the quote was on screen and his reaction. Good job!
andrew sharp
Whoa too much camera movement would have been a lot better if camera was locked down
Joel Murphy
too many camera moves. was distracted from the animation. after focusing on the animation, you have some good ideas, but there are too many gestures. Could be simplified. I love your idea of doing the power point presentation! Very nice!