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Talkative Driver
by Charles Feng
Who minds a talkative driver? They love to share their thoughts and experiences with passengers...
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andrew sharp
cool piece play with the eyes narrowing and openingh a bit more
Mitchell Kirkpatrick
Good acting, expressive movement and face. The camera angle could be a bit better, if you switch to a low angle or push in a bit. A drift or very slight zoom might help. The real problem there is the edge of the car on the right being red/orange, drawing attention to that side of the screen, while the character is talking to someone off-screen to the other side. It creates a confusing visual hierarchy. It makes it feel like we're almost listening to his back-or being pulled off-screen. Unfortunately, you have some really nice motion, but the awkwardness steals away some of the visual appeal.
Angshuman Mazumdar
Love the body motion.
Cristian
I enjoy the subtle acting choices. Probably the only one that was a little offsetting was the "be curious" part. Everything else looks great!





