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Simple Sommers
Just a simple man with his guitar, thinking about good times.
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Mitchell Kirkpatrick
This is really interesting. Watch the rhythmic timing with the character's movements. Unless they are purposely the same to match the music or something, it's pretty awkward and unrealistic to move from one resting position to another 4 times with the exact same timing. It's like doing the robot. But the cool wipe to the second shot happens on the exact same timing, as well. If there was a beat to the music, and those motions were timed to hit those beats, this would be much better. Otherwise maybe change that timing for variation, and it will increase your appeal.
Awesome character designs and style. Unless it's on purpose, watch the proportions with the character's head and hat.