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The lecturer
by Armanasat
This person is a lecturer and is lecturing.
Comments
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David Poole
It's a great animation, however, when he says be curious, the character is a little too forceful and angry. Maybe just lighting it up a bit might be good.
Pevin Kinel
The cane spin is good but could be brilliant with a little anticipation. Nice try showing him put weight on it afterwards during the walk but I feel it's not quite there yet. Maybe use the hips?
Alex Mey
Lots of character added and acting reference was clearly implemented very well. Lots of subtle detail packed into great gesture choices. The staging of elements is simple and very effective. I love the little wink after the twirl. Nice job.
Ashar Khan
nice idea
Eva Margaretha
very nice staging! lipsync needs to be pushed a little bit more, otherwise great!
Vee
Body movements are good, but it’s difficult to see the lip sync from the angle you chose.