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Be Curious
by Ally
A hardworking father shares a quote that reflects his values.
Comments
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Pevin Kinel
Acting is solid but let down by the lipsync. That and the timing could be refined
Alex Mey
Really great gestures with loads of attention to detail. I've got to nitpick a tiny fault. In his right hand at 174, his pinky is straight, two frames later it's completely curled. It happens so fast against the high contrast hat background, that it becomes distracting in an otherwise smooth movement. Really nice job overall!
Joel Murphy
Your render looks great! the set and the textures and the lighting are awesome! The character is also really nice. Watch the mouth animation. There are a few challenges with the animation of the lip-sync. The mouth wide/narrow should flow into the next pose. make sure you're hitting the shapes. Really nice work over all!