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by John Toledo

Final Rating: 5.29. Finished #28 out of 68 entries.

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Animator

John Toledo

Experience

6 years more or less

Time Taken

5 Days

Description

Mia Rig by Alorema Srudio

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Comments

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Andrei Llacuna

I like the "really" part at the end. her smiling is a such a nice contrast with her angry and sad acting.

Posing is pretty good but her right arm slamming at the table at "fear and respect me!" needs more oompf. tilt her right shoulders up a bit more and remove a couple of frames and the down phase of the 'slam' to make it more snappier.

Make the fingers and hand flow a bit more at "sad sack.." part. really open the fingers more and give it more of a dragging feel or gestural flow to it.