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You Don't Know French

by Mitch_D

Final Rating: 5.25. Finished #44 out of 117 entries.

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Animator

Mitch_D

Experience

less than 2 years

Time Taken

About a week on and off

Description

I actually did know French at one point!

Comments

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Amelie Olima

The acting and staging is great! Try to experiment more with overlapping and secondary actions. Avoid twinning too. Nice work.

Jennifer Croom

I love this- the walking at the beginning has a bit too much hip movement imo but I love her expression at the end! Very good stuff

David Nori

The second character has a really interesting face in the beginning and it looked promising, but then she went of model. Try to keep the same 'bone structure' in the face.