Cherry in Paris

Cody Cessna

Nice illustration, but the animation isn’t at the same level.

Louis M.F.

Where's the movement? Where's the expression? Why are there eight entries of static fruit with rough lip-syncing? Are these AI generated? These questions keep me up at night. If you did make this from scratch it's got a cool style, but you really ought to pick up a pencil and paper and animate yourself a flipbook, even if it looks less refined you'll learn far quicker and the finished result will be far more charming.

...That said, if these eight entries are from a classroom where you're being taught the very basics of how to use animation software it's pretty good for a first timer. I hope my angry review was the flame-baptism you needed to kick-start your learning process.

David Nori

Nice colors, but has no movement. They're talking berries so they could move too