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Goodbye, Paris
I know, it's very bad, but I didn't have enough time to finish it.
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Louis M.F.
Aaaah, the staging and pacing is great, and especially impressive for flip-a-clip, but for sure lacking in polish (as I'm sure you're aware). Perspective is pretty off in the environment and the chicken scratch is real, but you can def fix that with life drawing classes and more confidence in drawing strokes from your elbow, rather than your wrist. I will say though, your forms are solid and that dress-folding animation was mana from heaven. Would absolutely love to see a polished piece with your style. Keep it up!
Ezra Allen
I would not do such a wide for the whole shot. I would either go tighter in for the whole shot or cut to some mids.