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French
The lady does her best to be French.
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Phongsakorn Khamchaisu
the character should be in the same position. The white guy should be on the left screen and the Yellow guy on the right. In the middle shot, they swap positions that make an audience lose focus.
Louis M.F.
Simple but fun, you've pushed the gestures really well. The mustache gag rocks. I reckon you could bring this animation up a notch just by having the white hair dude settle into a judgemental pose while blondie's talking, he looks kind of uncomfortable holding that lean for so long.
Amelie Olima
The acting on this is really funny and I love the moustache gag! Move the character's shoulders/clavicles a bit further when you want to move their arms. Avoid floaty animation. Nice work!