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Rats in Paris
by Konor
Description
Two rats realise they might have a problem while trying to buy some croissants.
Comments
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Ezra Allen
I like the characters. Animation needs work. The poses on the grey character for "better not to try" are making no sense and feel mechanical.
It's an interesting style and I like it. You just need to work the poses harder make the pose say everything you're trying to say in your key poses before you start animating.
David Nori
Face-palm feels pre-anticipated and the facial expressions of the same character (the grey one) stays mostly the same so not enough contrast.