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Hello Emily
by Alexandre
I've just finished school
A little every evening over two weeks
I hadn't done an exercise like that for a long time. There are things to pick up, I can see that. Progress is underway!
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Phongsakorn Khamchaisu
nice!
Richard Adams
Top 10 entry IMO.
Louis M.F.
Ol' lady's hand could've skipped the third pose (frame 56) to make the whole motion smoother. Nitpick aside you've got a banger of an artstyle (rare to see an eastern/western blend work so well) and great expressions, the girl's lean in+hand gesture has a real nice ease to it, absolutely devious. Great work on the hands, they're solid as hell, I actually reckon you're good enough at rendering hands to start stylising them (Check out Osamu Tezuka's hand sheets for inspo, I reckon they'd suit your style perfectly). Would love to see you practice with line weight because this style has legs. Keep it up!