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French Marimo

by Arely Hurtado

Final Rating: 2.75. Finished #95 out of 117 entries.

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Animator

Arely Hurtado

Experience

about a year o two

Time Taken

6 hours

Description

Zoro shows Sanji his skills with the French

Tags
2D

Comments

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Louis M.F.

Nice work with the colours, but be careful directly referencing anime. I'm a bit of an anime fan myself, but keep in mind most Japanese artists balance lots of traditional life drawing with a few artist studies to develop visual shorthand of their own based on solid foundational skills. Have a go animating the lip sync on ones, it sounds like more work but you can get into the groove real quick, esp. with a mirror next to your desk to use your own face as reference. Good to see you paying attention to line weight! This is a great start, you've got a ways to go but you're obviously putting a good amount of thought into your work which is always good to see

David Nori

Feels unmotivated and the characters don't embody the voices. Maybe they ate some fruit that made them female or made them sound female?