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Fail at the ballet

by Shai Daza

Final Rating: 3.02. Finished #91 out of 117 entries.

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Animator

Shai Daza

Experience

10 yeats

Time Taken

12 hours

Description

A girl falls during a ballet class and is scolded by her teacher for not knowing French

Comments

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JISANG KIM

sorry but it look so horrible

Louis M.F.

Woah, impressive render-wise and the camera work's great, but the girl on the ground looks like she's hovering into the uncanny valley. Have a look into FK / IK to fix it and be careful with your key poses. I could picture this clip looking ten times better if the ground was kept out of shot, but don't let that dissaude you. Practice hard and develop this style, it's great.

Leesha Mendoza

is this unreal? :o whoa...

Amelie Olima

The lip sync is good! Critique: the animation is too floaty - there needs to be holds between each pose so it's easier to read. But the acting is definitely there which is awesome, and it was funny! Good work!