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Why O Why
by Nick Cioffi
Description
A late night phone call hits with some hard truths about interpersonal relationships.
Comments
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Josh
It's definitely not bad, I like the story too, but the only thing that makes it a little off is that sudden arm movement when she pulls her phone back up to her face, if you gave that movement a little more time so it was a little slower movement, it would of helped a ton. : )