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Pure poetry
This is a little animation that looks for a fun side
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David
Not a fan of the "hiding the face" for 2/3s of the performance. Although the mustache is a funny reveal, it loses something. Maybe let her face the audience the entire time and then put on a fake mustache at the end?
Josh
I would of had the mustache as one of those attached to a stick like at a photo booth and had her facing the camera the entire time, the point of the contest is really to show off your animation skills, if shes hiding her face which is the important part of the animation contest, it comes off as trying to give yourself less work and skipping out on the work. It's not a bad story I like what you had planned, but i think you could of kept the same story with a non attached mustache that she adds when she pretends the male part rather than hiding her face. Anyways good work with poses. : )