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A proud guy
by DanMengWang
Description
A proud man always ruins in his pride.
Comments
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Joel Murphy
The only thing (within the rules) that bothers me is that his head leaves the frame as he's talking. Your actions seem like they have nice timing/spacing though!
NO extra sound fx! Tisk Tisk. Like the concept though. wish you could have shown the idea without cheating.
Aisha Kennett
Like the twist. But it's against the rule to add extra sound effect.
Walter Morris
over all not bad, though their are a few moments of awkward movement or jerky movements.
Imon Branch
the body movement needs a little work