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The Getaway Van

by Daniel Bennett

Final Rating: 4.01. Finished #112 out of 218 entries.

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Animator

Daniel Bennett

Experience

1+ years in industry

Time Taken

one week

Description

A man tries to drive away with his comrades but he is stopped.

Comments

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Kyle Newton

The scene doesn't make too much sense and the characters could use more attention in their faces. Keep experimenting with that exaggerated motion though

Nathaniel Vaughan

Where are the prisoners? Also, there should be some perspective on what he was holding, as it nearly blends into the background.

Ben Hall

Need 12 principles of animation here