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A Captivating Critique
An animator is drawing whilst his supervisor critiques his work and asks where he is going to take the prisoners, even though the characters being drawn are nothing to do with being prisoners?
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Christopher Winn
Wow, love the claymation feel of the render but the animation needs some more work. I don't understand the story too well either
David BESNIER
too much movements :-/
Conor Gilmore
Good posing over all. try offsetting body parts. like first spine then head then hand. like a chain. give shooting reference a try.
Kyle Newton
Hands are snapping erratically and moving much wider than the dialogue warrants. Tone it down a bit.
Ben Hall
Need 12 principles of animation here