Dog Park

Antoine Desnoyers

XD

Brittany H. Simpson

Nice job on the background. The person's movements seem really slow and linear, adding in eye blinks and breathing might help.

Emmelyn

Interesting concept, would love to see more body movement to help the characters feel alive. I love the poses, though! I thought it was funny when the dog stared, and then turned around saying "Good luck with that." Good timing with that.

Zachary Lussier

The aniamtion feel very incomplete on every points, so i think you have to improve in your overall animation. Continue to improve one day you will get it ;-)

Foxy

This is very confusing to me. I'd work on your clarity of storytelling.

eddyiv

The dog character's loewer body doesnt seem to actually move, even tho we don't see it, doing it would make it feel more realistic.

Simon Côté

good lipsync :)

Éloise Valiquette

I think you still have some work to do on the timing of your animation, it's a bit too slow for the woman's movements. For the dog it would be good to review your animation with a reference of a dog walking on its hind legs, it looks like it is sliding. The woman's lipsync looks good to me.

Anthony Abou Rezk

Good start! It seems like you were in a blocking stage for some parts of the animation, am I wrong? There is some good stuff to it, I like how you reversed the roles, that's creative!