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Annoyed
A lot of the ideas for movement in this animation sort of came to me as I was animating. It ended up making my storyboards incredibly dull looking by comparison.
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eddyiv
Sometimes, staying still for abit or making movements of somewhat drastically different speeds can be helpfull.
Éloise Valiquette
The movement of your child character seems to move too much in a short time at first which makes it confusing to what she is doing. Also your animation lacks a little fluidity to make the movements more alive!
Zachary Lussier
I think you can improve your general animation, because your mouvement are too mecanical. Continue to improve one day you will get it ;-)
Simon Côté
some movements are too slow and others are too fast ;)
Anthony Abou Rezk
I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!