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11second shot
by priyanshi
every shot teaches something and it was simply joyful with this challenge too:))
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Julian Dill
when she say's "what if I told you..." you forgot to pronounce the "you"
Alejandro Parizia
One of the best for this month. Great poses and acting is very convincing. It just needs a bit more polishing in certain areas, like when the girl hits the table her hands feel like popping, and the trayectory of the remote control feels weird. But amazing job overall.
Emmelyn
Lip movements and expression timing could be improved upon, for example I don't think she would go right back to drawing while telling him that, but overall nice animation and ambience of the scene.
Simon Côté
really fluid i love it ! I really like how you animated the girl :)
Zachary Lussier
Great animation i love it !
eddyiv
Everything is pretty clean!
Éloise Valiquette
I really like your animation! Especially the ambience of your lighting, it's really well done.
Anthony Abou Rezk
Nice! I like the girls' animation, she has some character to her, but it could be more polished, with a bit more time, and a better understanding of principles, you'd do something really nice, so keep up the work!