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Bonnie's Treat
by bhavesh
Description
A story between two friends where the one is cooking macaroni for both of them and the other friend surprised her with sushi and snacks.
Comments
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Heiner
I like how you use the pause after the first sentence and let her put down her handbag.
Michael D. Smith
Needs more eye blinks.
Tom S
I feel that the distance from the characters is too great.
Sam M
still pretty stiff but good gestures and lipsync