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Knight Tryouts

by Benjamin Reister

Final Rating: 4.36. Finished #85 out of 152 entries.

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Animator

Benjamin Reister

Experience

A student at university for animation

Time Taken

Three weeks

Description

A squire who got kicked out of 8 Knight Schools goes to one more. 9th times the charm right??

Tags
2D

Comments

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Nathaniel Vaughan

I like the designs for these characters; they're very stylized.

Anthony

I'm not sold on skipping the lip sync on the "knight" character and using just body movements. The body movements are too tightly synced to the dialog and it's unnatural and distracting. Your little girl character is a mix of decently smooth and jerky animations. Frame 214-215 and 218-219, for example. There isn't any build up to the character movements, the positions just change.