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Keeping Secrets
Someone struggles to explain his situation to his friend.
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Per Cardell
It looks like the actor is rehersing this little speach before delivering it. If that is the idea behind this piece I like some of the stuff in your performance. You could work more on the graphs to avoid static poses. Keep it up!
Caleb Rankin
I really like your body animation. The mouth could use some work, try tightening the lips on the O and Ooo shapes.
Aaron Clement
A little floaty. Good staging.
Jasmine Moody
I think it needed more expression.
srinivasarao
flat acting needs to improve alot
Ryan D Lowe
This is nice. That hand on SR needs to be staged a bit more to the right so it doesn't lose that figure/shape/silhouette. It will read better!
Amartya Mukherji
you could have pushed the graphs a little more. specially the eye brows
Danny Kneip
Decent sync. The character expressions are fairly tame - he seems ambivalent toward what he's saying. Good little bounce in the fingers.