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Fair advice
A father warns his kid.
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Per Cardell
It is not easy to be a child. I like the idea.
Ryan D Lowe
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Aaron Clement
Love it... not sure about the close up on the lips, tho.
Vanessa Gonzalez
Not bad, however the watermark on the video is a little distracting.
Joyabrata Saha
not up to the mark
Richard Clark
The pose on both characters at the end could be improved on. I've never seen anyone stand like that. And the baby is too upright. Add a little bend to his spine.
Danny Kneip
Bizarre choice with the close-up. The baby is frozen in time and doesn't compliment the lead character, who is decently animated.