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Guilty Satisfaction
by David Vann
Final year student studying animation at Bradford University
2 Weeks
A suspicious character emerges from his house to explain the scene.
Comments
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[user]
I like the idea!! :)
but i guess the poses are not clear enough.
f.e.: frame 108 - he looks disappointed for no reason. and his switch from shy to evil is not motivated.
Aaron Clement
Good creativitly. Needs work on the body mechanics.
Amartya Mukherji
Nice try ... There is scope for improvement.
Danny Kneip
So many gestures, so little motivation.
Ryan D Lowe
Too many ideas shoved into one acting beat. Subtle going forward and try to line it up with just a single idea.
Robert Holmen
He's overacting.
Richard Clark
acting is a little over the top. Should dial that back. It's also too pose to pose.