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the conversation

by fiwi

Final Rating: 2.02. Finished #136 out of 138 entries.

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Animator

fiwi

Experience

5 mois

Time Taken

3 Days

Description

2 persons were talking about an article

Comments

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Eric Raffle

not ready for the competition, it still looks like your in blocking mode, step mode, your motions are still too stiff you need to use the graph editor to smooth out your motions.

Manuel

Okay, I can see what you were going for but the constant flailing isn't very convincing, the limbs bend all over the place, there's no sense of weight or momentum and there's no lip movement, which I won't hold against you because you wanted it to be more about body language.

Nick Doyle

Good start but needs lip-sync, and smoother transition between poses

imran younas butt

no facial animation and also problem in body mechanics