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A Drunks Bottom Line
by Ukia N
Description
A final assignment for a class final. I worked on this on and off for four weeks.
Comments
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Gayle Yeier
I loved her animation and reaction a little better than the man's. I feel like this is a good start. His walk is a little stiff and uneven, even for a drunk walk. A drunken character would be full of drags and arcs. That might help your character come more to life.
Robyn Myers
The general body movements could use some smoothing- needs to be more fluid and natural. Great story though!
Carolyn Mennecke
There's too much movement in the body, and too little movement in the face.