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Emotional Handicap
by Kyle
Description
a father address his daughters addiction
Comments
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Nathan Younger
great camera movements
Dalton Krajewski
I liked the timing of the movements quite a bit! The main issue I see is that the poses could use some exaggeration. The male character's spine stays fixed and rigid the entire time, so bending his back a bit would make his poses a lot more expressive. In the first half of the video, also, the woman's pose seems unnatural--almost like she's been folded in half--so dialing that back a bit and conveying the slouching posture using the back curve would help immensely.
behrouz
what about man's fingers? let them move a little